Showing posts with label editing. Show all posts
Showing posts with label editing. Show all posts

Thursday, May 5, 2016

Body Language that shows Loneliness

Observation is the key to writing descriptions and interpreting the signals given by the body. When a character feels lonely there is usually a pattern in his/her body signals. Of course, every character is unique, however, the pointers below can be of help to trigger writers' imagination.

Lonely people are generally disinterested in their appearance
Voice may end in monotone
May keep their schedules tight
Often sigh heavily
Feel happy about receiving mail
Rush to check phone alerts
Hug oneself
Make small talk with electrician, plumber, bus driver, etc
They think they are introverts
May call family and friends often
Daydream
Sometimes feel unworthy.

Characters can manifest any of these signs depending on what, as a writer, you wants to achieve at that point in the story.

Finally, search the web for  'loneliness' in images to help identify how lonely the character feels.





Wednesday, May 4, 2016

The Art of Styling Sentences

A good story written in a poor manner diminishes the expected effect. It is imperative to get the narrative right. I found "The Art of Styling Sentences" by Ann Longknife and K. D. Sullivan quite useful. The authors say, the book aims "to improve fundamentals of good sentence structure" and "to improve your style". It has 20 sentence patterns which, kind of covers most of the patterns used by authors today.


30 ways to describe 'pain'




It doesn't have to always be just 'very painful'. Here are other ways to describe 'pain'.

flickering
pricking
mild
intense
scalding
exhausting
terrifying
killing
miserable
piercing
tearing
nauseating
electrical
pounding
knot-like
tender
horrible
radiating
waves
quivering
boring
aching
dull
tingling 
taut
sickening
punishing
wretched
intense
tight